2014年6月大学英语四级作文模板
类型一：图表作文+观点对比+社会热点
1. 描述图表+引述主题 2. 分析原因 3. 总结陈词
第一段： 描述图表：
这是一幅非常有趣和发人深省的图片。
This is a tremendously interesting and thought-provoking picture.
如图所示，XXX的问题变得越来越严重了，并已经引起全社会的广泛关注。
As is vividly shown by the picture, the issue of ….has become a major concern around our society, which is increasingly serious. 引述主题：
When asked about whether …, people’s attitudes vary from person to person. 词汇升级：
“但是”= while ,whereas, nevertheless “不同的”= opposite
一些人认为…,但是另外一些人持有不同的观点，他们坚信…
Some people are under the impression that…, whereas others take an opposite side, firmly believing that… 词汇升级：
“我认为”英语怎么说？ From my point of view, In my own perspective, In my own opinion, From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the former /latter opinion than the latter/former one of the following reasons. 我同意前一个观点：
As far as I am concerned, the former point of view coincides with mine.
第二段：
In the first place, What is more, Last but not least,
1. Among the most convincing reason offered by people for this phenomenon, one should be
emphasized that…
2. Another factor that we cannot ignore is that…
3. Eventually, I want to bring you attention to the reason that…
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第三段：
这幅图的目标不是图画本身，而是为了抨击存在于我们社会中的盛行的现象。
What the chart really aims at is not just a picture itself but to criticize this popular phenomenon existing in our society.
Based on the evidence before me, I am bound to accept the viewpoint that..
类型二：图表类作文
第一段：描述趋势（变化） 第二段：分析变化的原因 第三段：自己的看法或想法
第一段全貌：
As can be shown by the bar graph, great changes have been taking place in this trend. Obviously, China has experienced a dramatic increase in the divorce rate in the previous forty years.
As is vividly shown in the graph, the total… is divided into four parts. A makes up 34% 51% stands for B 9% refers to C 6% is defined as D
Isolated as the figures seem to be, as a matter of fact , they are connected to one another closely.
第二段：
1. 总说
Obviously, a variety of complicated factors contribute to the phenomenon, with the following one being the foremost. I can think of no better reasons for the phenomenon other than the following two. 2. 分说
2.1 Among the most convincing reason offered by people for this phenomenon, one should be emphasized that…
2.2 Another factor that we cannot ignore is that…
3.3 Eventually, I want to bring you attention to the reason that…
第三段: 1. 喊口号 2. 谈措施
Generally speaking, it is high time that we great emphasis on this issue. That is to say, further attention is to be paid to this issue. Only through effective actions has been taken can we prevent this trend.
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类型三：观点对比类作文
1. 2. 3. 4. 1.
启：引出论点 承：一方认为 转：另一方认为 合：你认为。。。
引出论点：
When it comes to whether … people’s attitudes vary from person to person. 或：There is no consensus of opinions among people about whether…
About 升级—> concerning ; regarding; as to ; in point to; with regard to 2. 提出一方观点：
Some people hold the attitude that…. 分论点：
First of all, / In the first place, / To begin with, Furthermore, / Moreover, / What is more, Eventually, / finally, /Last but not least,
3. 另一方观点
观点对比之间的过渡句 Just as an old Arab proverb says, “Every coin has its two sides”. 提出另一方观点：
On the contrary, others are under the impression that … 分论点：
There are some reasons behind this attitude. For one thing, For another 4. 你认为
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the former opinion rather than the latter one. From what has been discussed above, we may naturally arrive at the conclusion that…
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1. 遣词
1.1形容记忆深刻
I had an experience deeply rooted in my memory. 1.2形容记不住
That experience would be never fading from my memory. 1.3尽力做某事
Exhaust every effort in one’s power. Spare no effort to do something
Develop one’s potential to the full to do something. 1.4 不得不做某事
Have no choice but to do Have no alternative but to 1.5 形容数量多
Considerable 相当大的 Endless 没完没了的 Countless 无数的
综合练习：我有很多作业要做。
I am occupied with endless homework that I have no choice but to exhaust every effort in my power to do.
1.6表示喜欢
Be the main source of my pleasure 1.7非常的 Exceedingly Tremendously Vitally 有一个激动人心日子永生难忘，那天妈妈送给我一个非常喜欢的电脑作为我的生日礼物。 The exceedingly exciting day was deeply rooted in my memory, when my mother bought me a computer as birthday present, which exerted tremendous fascination on me.
There is a general feeling that people are no long as honest as before. 越来越
Increasing Growing
Booming 急速发展的
There is an increasing concern over the population growth.
有越来越多的关注在人口增长。
If we don’t recognize the seriousness of the problem, we will make a big mistake. 如果我们认识不到这个问题的严重性，就会犯大错误。
In spite of the fact that there are reefs, we cannot deny the existence of sea.
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不能因为礁石就否定大海，不能因为死亡就否定生命，不能因为牟利就否定诚信。 In spite of the fact that there are deaths, we cannot deny the existence of life.
In spite of the fact that there is right to make profit, we cannot deny the existence of honey. I consider reading books as the best and the most precious thing one can have. 我认为读书才是无价之宝。
万能两点结尾：
1. 只有当这些措施付诸实践后，这个问题才能一步步解决。
Only when these practical measures are taken will this problem be dealt with step by step and be gone with the wind.
2. 该问题如此严重，我们不得不采取一些措施来解决他。
So serious is this problem that we have no alternative but to take some effective measures to solve it.
3. 幽默有助于我们承受负担，减缓压力，战胜失败，放松自我，使生活更加轻松。
Humor helps us bear our burdens, lessen our tension, overcome our frustration, relax ourselves and make life easier.
4. 将这些措施付诸实践，水资源短缺问题就可以解决。 These measures are put into practice. The shortage of water can be solved. 5. 老龄化问题得到很好地解决。我门就可以创造稳定、和谐的社会。
6. The old age problem is well handled, we can maintain a stable and harmonious society.
附录：2013年12月四级作文中可能用到的句子： 1. 生活时间角度
(2) Sth will make our life more enjoyable, that is to say, sth can add color to the dull routine of every day life.
Sth可以使我们的生活更加有乐趣，也就是说，sth为我们每天枯燥的生活增添了一些色彩。
(5) sth, by occupying spare time so constructively, makes a person contented, with no time for boredom.
Sth 很有建设意义的占据了人们的空余时间，使得人们很满足，进而没有时间来觉得无聊。 2.知识经验角度 （5）By taking a major-related part-job, students can not only improve their academic studies, but gain much experience, experience they will never be able to get from the textbooks. 通过做一份和专业相关的工作，学生不仅能够提高他们的专业能力，而且能获得从课本上得不到的经验。 3.环境健康角度
（1）Now people in growing numbers are beginning to believe that some certain sports contribute directly to our health by giving us some physical exercises.
现在越来越多的人开始相信体育锻炼能有助于身体健康。 （2）As a matter of fact, travel has become part of our life. This situation is encouraging, for it not only broadens people's minds to the extend which may not be reached previously, but also relaxes them physically, which help people work out mental problems more actively.
实际上，旅行已经成为我们生活的一个部分，这样的情形是喜人的，因为旅行不仅可以拓宽人们的视野达到之前没有达到的范围，而且还可以在身体上得到放松，这能使人们更
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加积极的克服心理问题。
(3) Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
污染对我们的生存造成巨大威胁。
（4）Environmental experts point out that increasing pollution not only causes serious problems such as global warming but also could threaten to end human life on our planet.
环境学家指出：持续增加的污染不仅会导致像全球变暖这样严重的问题，而且还将威胁到人类在这个星球的生存。 4.合作角度
（1）sth can give students team-spirit and teach them how to cooperate with others. Because in those activities, students usually need to cooperate with others in order to get good achievement. Sth 可以赋予学生们团队精神，并教会他们学会与人合作。因为在这些活动中，学生通常需要相互合作目的是得到提高。 5.科技发展环境角度
（1）In the last decades, advances in medical technology have made it possible for people to live longer than in the past.
在过去的几十年，先进的医疗技术已经使得人们比过去活的时间更长成为可能。
（2）Admittedly, this limit has made it possible for the public to realize the importance of environmental protection and enable we Chinese people to cherish the beauty of our communities. 可以承认，这一限制已经使得公众认识到环境保护的重要性，并且使得我们中国人去珍惜我们美丽的社区。
（3）Although many people claim that, along with the rapid economic development, the number of people who use bicycle is decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. The information I’ve collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.
虽然很多人承认，随着经济的快速发展，使用自行车的人数正在下降，自行车一定会消失。根据我最近几年所收集到的信息使我相信自行车会在现代社会中扮演一个非常重要的角色。 6.成长成功
（4）From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw a conclusion that, although the parents' desire to look after children by themselves is understandable, its disadvantages far outweigh the advantages.
通过以上讨论，我们可以得出如下结论：尽管家长想亲自照看孩子的愿望是可以理解的，但是这样做的缺点远大于优点。
（5） From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that, although extra studies indeed enjoy many obvious advantages, its disadvantages shouldn't be ignored and far outweigh its advantages. It is absurd to force children to take extra studies after school. 通过以上讨论，我们可以得出结论：尽管额外学习的确有很多优点，但它的缺点不可忽视，且远大于它的优点。因此，放学后强迫孩子额外学习是不明智的。（结论句式）
（6）While achieving success is easier said than done, persistence does in fact pay off. One of the most important traits of a successful person is self-confidence, another is desire, and still another is determination.
获得成功说起来比做起来容易，然而坚持不懈确实会有好结果。成功人士的最重要的特征之一是自信，第二是渴望，还有一个是决心。
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历年真题作文加分亮点： 1. vividly
2. remind … of …
3. undertake important task
4. lay a solid foundation for 为…打下坚实基础 5. make the difference 6. when it comes to 7. in one word
8. As is vividly revealed in the picture above… 9. Nonetheless 然而
10. Broaden one’s horizons 开阔眼界 11. With the advent of…随着…出现
12. Nowadays increasing people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of…. 13. In the modern society we are often sorry to see that people are reluctant to help 14. There are many causes for this dramatic growth/decrease. First … 15. Then what is wrong with our society?
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